My Best Friend
I have a best friend. His name is Efan. He studies at Junior High School 2 Jombang, like me. Now he is in the 8th grade. Efan is 13 years old. He lives in Weru.
Efan is tall and thin. His face is round. He has short, curly, and black hair. His nose is flat. His skin is brown. He has brown eyes.
Efan is a good boy. He usually helps his mother in the market on Sundays. His is smart in Social sciences. His hobby are playing internet games and playing football.
Efan is really my best friend.
Your t3xt is g00d
ReplyDeleteHa...ha.......hi....hi........hu....hu......
his hobby is not so good..
ReplyDeleteplaying internet..
ckckckck...
but, can throw his problem..
haha...
thats good !!!
I know Efan usually plays Ninja Saga game....
ReplyDeleteAll the boys in our class always play Ninja Saga.. right??
Brown eyes? y'sure?
ReplyDelete@All: It's a good text. Related to Efan's hobby, playing internet games, in my opinion it is OK, since it is done in his leisure time such as on holidays. He should be able to manage his time well.
ReplyDelete@Tari: Why don't you check his eyes?
Your text is good enough, but might be able to do repairs words - words and sentences so that the results are better than ever. hopefully better results. Aminn .................
ReplyDeleteGood text !
ReplyDeletebe better friend