My Best Friend
One of my friends’ names is Muhammad Husni Wahdana. When he was in the 7th grade, he was called “Narji” because he looked like Narji. Actually, his nickname is Dana. In Indonesian language, “Dana” means “money”. He is now about 13 years old.
Dana is fat but he is not too short. His eyes are wide enough and he does not wear any glasses. If you look at his skin, it is the same with the Indonesian people’s skin in common, brown like the skin of sapodilla. His nose is flat. He has straight, short, and black hair. He has an oval face too. Overall, you can call him as a chubby person.
Dana has unique personality. He is a calm person. He lives freely. He is also a kind person but, sometimes he makes me angry because of his behavior. He will be nice to me only if he needs some help or something from me. If he does not need anything, he will behave as the ordinary friends, or he even derides me. However, I always forgive him because I know that he is a lonely boy who needs cares from his friends. Although sometimes he does that bad behavior, he always keeps his friendship. He is a person who likes to make jokes. He always makes his friend laugh with his jokes. Sometimes he makes his teachers laugh, too. Besides, he is also an active boy. He is never shy to express his opinion or ask something to the teachers. That is why a lot of people like him.
Dana also has some hobbies. One of his hobbies is eating. He admits that eating is one of his hobbies. That is why he looks so chubby. Besides, he also has another hobby that is drawing. He likes to draw during the rest time. He usually draws a cartoon, clothes, or anything that he imagines in his brain.
Taken as a whole, Dana is a happy and chubby boy.
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