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Text 1
My Best Friend
(by Inesita R)
I have a friend. Her full name is Riska Ayunda Rahmayani, but we usually call her Riska or Icha. She was born on October 26, 1994. She is sixteenth years old. She lives at 10 Gubernur Suryo Street Jombang.
She is tall, slim, and beautiful. Her hair is black and long. She is funny and fashionable. She has slanted eyes, a pointed nose, a round face, and white skin.
Riska is a nice girl. She is a smart student but she is not arrogant. She often invites us to study together. When we find difficulties, she teaches us until we understand the materials. That is why she has a lot of friends.
She has some hobbies; reading, writing, and singing. From the three hobbies, she likes reading most because by reading we can get more knowledge which we have not known before.
Riska is really my best friend.
Your text is good enough, but might be able to do repairs words - words and sentences so that the results are better than ever. hopefully better results. Aminn .................
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